NaPoWriMo: Day 4 – Superficial Save

Well, the good news is I have a poem. The bad news is it it terrible.

It is a shame as it started very well, full of beautiful language and wonderful imagery. But it lacks structure, and dosen’t hang together quite right. I’d look at it further, but of course, it’s a new day and therefore onto the next one.

Oh well, with 30 poems not all of them were likely to turn out well. But the words were ever so pretty…

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